better get to it

I want you

on your knees,

hands on my thighs

licking your way

to forgiveness.

-Jasยฉ

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15 responses to “better get to it

  1. As a suggestion, kissing might have been a different choice, it sounds warmer in the context of the poem but otherwise I like the poem. It has heat and motion to it.

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